just a few critisisms!
lead is dry - add more reverb and delay?
also, the sond is quite empty - add a pad or arp in the background (the reverb on the lead will help this too!)
the kick is a bit low - the main part im hearing is a cymbal!?
and try to use less of the blutonium boy sample vocals - sounds a bit unprofessional
right, good points
got some nice tunes going on here! i do really like the riff you've made!
the song doesnt bore me - thats always good! a track that keeps attention is an awesome track!
definately needs improvement - but its good noen the less!
keep it up!